apprentership

[stephen 1993]

hi my names stephen i am looking for a apprentership in this industry but it is proving hard to get into this cerrier because i can't seem to get an apprentership because of the companys around preston had not got anothe work to take apprenterships on, if any one is looking for an apprentership please could you contact me by email:[email protected] or ask for a contact number.
Iam also willing to travel to get into the trade.
please can someone let me no even if the outcome is positive thanks

 

[TinyT]

Sort your grammer out first. Sorry but it may help.

 

[Knobhead]

As TinyT says, get you grammar and spelling sorted first. You used a computer to post here, try using a spell check.

PS I write all my posts in Word first and then cut and paste them to the site.

 

[zedess]

are you from poland stephen?

 

[AWD]

Why how old are you Tony and you still cant spell?, Give him a break he is only after abit of advice on a apprenticeship! not to be told he cant spell, after all he is only 16/17 !!!!.

 

[topquark]

As TinyT says, get your grammar and spelling sorted first. You used a computer to post here, try using a spell check.

PS I write all my posts in Word first and then cut and paste them to the site.

Best start using the grammar checker as well Tony pmsl

 

[PC Electrics]

Why how old are you Tony and you still cant spell?, Give him a break he is only after abit of advice on a apprenticeship! not to be told he cant spell, after all he is only 16/17 !!!!.

He is being given a break!! The very best advice that can be given, based on the OP, is to get his English up to scratch. Whether you like it or not, if he is sending out CVs or application letters with that standard of English, they will just end up in the bin. Fact. The odd spelling or grammar error is forgivable, but that OP is appalling.

Indeed, when I took on my apprentice in January, it was a requirement of course entry at the college that he had a C grade English GCSE.

 

[alarm man]

as above steve,any cv with those sort of errors will be in the bin in seconds,you'd be better of texting, av u ne jobs m8 wana b a lecy r sumit.

 

[stephen 1993]

thanks for answers i did realize i had made these mistakes sorry

 

[Knobhead]

Thanks for the answers. I did realise I had made mistakes, sorry.

So you make mistakes apologising for your mistakes.

You keyboard has some weird things on it like capital letters and punctuation marks. Try using them.

It’s as others have said, your CV and letter of introduction is your first point of contact with a company. Their first impression is what gets you through the door.