You don't say how many holiday dwelling were talking about, but at the main DNO intake there should be a series of Switch Fuses or a Ryefield panel that supplies these holiday dwellings. The main earth conductor off the PME head will need to comply with PME requirements to the MET in the intake building/room. (which may require a larger conductor size than 16mm, depending on the the actual size of the DNO supply) The supplies away from this building, to the respective dwellings, are in effect distribution circuits. The individual Dwellings MET's are actually EMT's, there can only be One MET and that is always at the origin of the supply.
Personally i would have run in 3 core 16mm SWA from the intake position to the dwelling units, but you have what you have and that's a 10mm Earthing conductor. So check if it meets all the criteria, if so, it should be fine.