Letter intro my company

[Spazz]

Hi all, I have been on my LA Planing Portal and got a nice list of people just submitted planning applications for new builds, extensions, change of use, etc...

I need a letter to introduce myself and to invite the owner to contact me for a quote for the electrical work - any guidance would be great.

Background:

• Sole Trader
• Competitive Service
• NAPIT Registered
• 7 years experience (inc some new builds)

I will want to tailor it to the type of work they are doing so it looks like I done my homework.
I have their:

• Name
• Address
• Address of property to be built, etc
• Type of work
• Planning Drawings
• Agent details
• no phone number or email

Thanks in advance

 

[ian.settle1]

Remove (inc some new builds) for a start

 

[Plonker 3]

I have a couple of letters drafted up by my sister who is a English school teacher so they sound quite professional Nic, PM me your email and I will send them to you.

 

[Spazz]

Remove (inc some new builds) for a start

that was not a sample of the letter - it was just some info to work with so everyone knows my background as I dont know where to start

 

[StuSpiers]

I simply wish them luck with their application.

Include brief details of your experience.

Include that you can sign off to labc satisfaction.

Invite them to consider you when at quotation stage.

No one wants to read a two page touting for business letter - keep it simple.

 

[Octopus]

Not wishing to sound negative but anyone sending such a letter is also going to state the same things!

However stating NAPIT etc could well be double dutch to most home owners, so a few words about Part P may well help you!

Agree with Ian about removing the (inc new builds)

And don't assume you'll get to quote for every letter posted

good luck.

 

[Plonker 3]

I did this a while ago, and got zero response, but didn't expect any. But then again you have to try lots of different tactics to try and get work sometimes.

 

[Spazz]

Thanks all - just drafted this one up - any thing I need to add?


Dear Mr Smith

Ref: Erection of a Building for Domestic use

It has been brought to my attention that you have a planning application with Pembrokeshire County Council for Erection of a Building for Domestic use.

I am a local electrician and can offer you my services at a competitive cost. I have over seven years of experience in the trade from a varied background, including new builds and extensions, re-wires and shop refits. I am used to working to tight deadlines and alterations being made during a job from my shop fitting experience.

All work fully certificated and compliant with all relevant wiring and building regulations


Should you wish to discuss the work you will need doing I am available on​

0**** ******


I wish you every success with your project.

Kind faithfully

***


Thanks to dillb for the template

 

[Spazz]

I did a similar email back in Feb t all letting agents - I had 2 out of 10 come back to me.

Not expecting any this time but would be nice to have 1 or 2 to cover the cost of stamps - lol

I have a list of about 100 applications which has been submitted in last 30 days - none been granted as yet

 

[Richard Burns]

Don't go too much into the regulations, they may not know what they mean just say something like "all work fully certificated and compliant with all relevant wiring and building regulations"

"Should you wish to discuss the work you will need doing I am available on the following contacts..."

 

[Plonker 3]

I would a little further back than ones just granted planning permission, as it may just be a enquiry or there will be quite a long period of time before the works even starts.

 

[Plonker 3]

I also found it useful to put the nature of the works they were having carried out (e.g single storey extension to side of the house) to make it more personal and they could then see it wasn't just a generic letter being sent out.

 

[StuSpiers]

Looks good but one recommendation:

“Yours faithfully” or “Yours sincerely”?

 

[Spazz]

Sincerely for Sir or Madam - (Remember Sin - Sir)

faithfully for Mr/Mrs/Miss Smith

 

[StuSpiers]

I think you may have that confused in your mind.

It is a sin to use sincerely for sir.

[h=2]‘Yours faithfully’ or ‘Yours sincerely’ in a business letter?[/h]When the recipient’s name is unknown to you:

• Dear Sir … Yours faithfully
• Dear Madam … Yours faithfully
• Dear Sir or Madam … Yours faithfully

When you know the recipient’s name:

• Dear Mr Hanson … Yours sincerely
• Dear Mrs Hanson … Yours sincerely
• Dear Miss Hanson … Yours sincerely
• Dear Ms Hanson … Yours sincerely

When addressing a good friend or colleague:

• Dear Jack … Best wishes/Best regards

Addressing whole departments:

• Dear Sirs … Yours faithfully