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[DaveyD]

Ha ha, agreed. Come off it Axel ... I mean, that first post you wrote wasn't that bad spelling wise and as for grammar, it wasn't that bad really either - I've seen worse.

Just admit the real reason is that you can't be arsed to do it yourself.

7/10 Try harder.


I have way too much time!

 

[SYKRAPS]

Most people offer M&S vouchers as rewards not Ipads, damn how times change.

If you go down this route I would give the reward for successful referals though so the people spread your name around.

Can just imagine it if your quote was £2900 your customer would want the price inflating to receive the reward lol.

 

[Adam W]

Ditto - If you write a letter I could give you a hand with spelling grammar, layout etc, but you have to give me the material to work on.
Offering a free ipad or something may not be such a bad idea - WE might not 'fall for it' but if you're talking about local kitchen fitting companies, bathroom companies, builders etc...
The usual approach is to offer something which you can source cheaper than they can - if you can get cheap ipads then go for it, otherwise maybe offer free or discounted labour as a loyalty incentive.

 

[markc123]

7/10 Try harder.


I have way too much time!

Haha :d

I am sorry, sincerley sorry.

However, DaveyD - your name has been noted, and it'll give me great pleasure to pick you up on anything you miss-spell in the future

....im waiting for you to pick me up on something in this very post, again! haha.

I just try to be intellectual at time's, i'm a spark's though...so i'm obviouslly not that bright!

 

[ste mac]

I will write you letter for a free ipad!

 

[Ponty Massive]

I will write you letter for a free ipad!

Not with that grammer you wont :6:

 

[markc123]

Not with that grammer you wont :6:

*grammar :tounge_smile:





I love this thread :biggrin:

 

[axel132132]

Glad i could be of assistance

 

[axel132132]

I came up with this..

Dear Sir / Madame

I am writing to you to let you know that we are an electrical company within your area, we are currently trying to expand our client base and we could offer you an affordable solution to your electrical needs. We have good customer reviews, a high standard of work and our electricians are all City and Guild trained.
We can do any of your works, no matter how big or small from a socket change to a full install.
Please visit our site at Electrician Huddersfield | Electrician In Woking for more details
We also offer a recommendation reward of £20 M&S voucher, and a reward for spending over £3000 with us. Spend £3000 and you will receive a free IPAD 2


Kind Regards
Unicorn Electrical

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It has paragraphs in word >.>

 

[wade88]

Haha :d

I am sorry, sincerley sorry.

However, DaveyD - your name has been noted, and it'll give me great pleasure to pick you up on anything you miss-spell in the future.

....I'm waiting for you to pick me up on something in this very post, again! Haha.

I just try to be intellectual at times, I'm a spark's though...so I'm obviously not that bright!

There you are chap

 

[axel132132]

Noo stop correcting everyone else help meeeeeeee!!

 

[wade88]

No stop correcting everyone else, help me!

........

 

[markc123]

I came up with this..

Dear Sir / Madame

I am writing to you to let you know that we are an electrical company within your area, we are currently trying to expand our client base and we could offer you an affordable solution to your electrical needs. We have good customer reviews, a high standard of work and our electricians are all City and Guild trained.
We can do any of your works, no matter how big or small from a socket change to a full install.
Please visit our site at Electrician Huddersfield | Electrician In Woking for more details
We also offer a recommendation reward of £20 M&S voucher, and a reward for spending over £3000 with us. Spend £3000 and you will receive a free IPAD 2


Kind Regards
Unicorn Electrical

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It has paragraphs in word >.>

I daren't actually write anything in response, because wade88 is slutting this thread haha.

Doesn't seem that bad to me, the bits in red i'd probably word different.

 

[wade88]

I daren't actually write anything in response, because wade88 is slutting this thread haha.

Doesn't seem that bad to me, the bits in red i'd probably word different.

:santa3:

 

[Octopus]

I can't see many people falling for this, they wil simply think you are charging too much in the first place if you can "give" an Ipad away!