What’s your opinions on this leaflet design?

[ppelec100]

Hi guys,

I’m currently getting a leaflet design made by a freelancer and it’s getting close to the final finish just a few minor tweaks left (heating to be removed on the front picture, picture to be rotated slightly, and few word changes in the why choose us section)

I have shown a few of my family and a friend and they think it’s alright but I wanted to get the opinion of other electricians to see if I’ve missed out anything, if I should change anything or remove anything before I get 5000 printed off.

Thank you all

 

[buzzlightyear]

There is nowt wrong in the leaflet, but would not put Napit on it Are you advertising for them, me I would take that off it's OK to show who you registered with I never advertised for NICEIC on my van or paper work.

 

[ppelec100]

There is nowt wrong in the leaflet, but would not put Napit on it Are you advertising for them, me I would take that off it's OK to show who you registered with I never advertised for NICEIC on my van or paper work.

Thanks mate.. with the napit logo I just thought it would give me more chance of getting work from clients as they’ll see I’m part of a “competent” person scheme even though any Joe can get registered with them nowadays it seems.

 

[buzzlightyear]

ask Napit would you sponsor me to advertise on your leaflets see what they say.

 

[DPG]

The sentence 'solutions that works for you' would be better as 'solutions that work for you'.

The sentence about regulations and safety needs a bit of either re-wording or punctuation ' I'd at least put a comma after 'regulations'

That's being picky though - it looks very nice. And I'd keep the Napit logo - people look out for people who are scheme registered.

 

[buzzlightyear]

That's being picky though - it looks very nice. And I'd keep the Napit logo - people look out for people who are scheme registered.

What if he jumps. Ship. Monie down the drain, put part p registration.
Good has.

 

[littlespark]

You could put “proud member of electrician forums dot net”…..
That means just as much as being a member of nappy-it

 

[mickegh]

Is it worth adding whatsapp

 

[pirate]

I'd lose the apostrophe in 10 year's...

 

[mickegh]

Id probably change the chandelier

It's probably a new fitting but doesn't have that modern look needed

 

[buzzlightyear]

Id probably change the chandelier

So would I.

 

[James]

I would consider changing "ADDITIONAL POINTS"

Not every householder understands that a point means a socket or light etc.

cant think of a better layman's term though.
Extra sockets doesn't seem to cut it.

but all in all, it looks good.

 

[DPG]

I'd lose the apostrophe in 10 year's...

An apostrophe is required here - a possessive one. Having said that, I think it may need to go after the 'S' rather than before it - because the years are plural.

 

[ppelec100]

The sentence 'solutions that works for you' would be better as 'solutions that work for you'.

Thanks mate! I was reading over this sentence quite a bit thinking what sounds grammatically correct to the point I had no idea anymore haha

 

[ppelec100]

You could put “proud member of electrician forums dot net”…..
That means just as much as being a member of nappy-it

Oh I think electriciansforum definitely means more than napit!