What’s your opinions on this leaflet design?

[ppelec100]

Is it worth adding whatsapp

Yes I was thinking that I’ll do that now

Id probably change the chandelier

It's probably a new fitting but doesn't have that modern look needed

Honestly I was kind of struggling for decent pictures where there’s not a lot of clutter and other objects in the way. I have good enough pictures for social media but for the leaflet I wanted to keep it as clean as possible. I feel like the like is decent as it’s a mix of modern and traditional where it would attract a mixed audience. The light I had on there before was super modern but I feel like it would just attract mostly young flash people, it was a little on the tacky side.

 

[ppelec100]

I would consider changing "ADDITIONAL POINTS"

Not every householder understands that a point means a socket or light etc.

cant think of a better layman's term though.
Extra sockets doesn't seem to cut it.

but all in all, it looks good.

Yeah I was thinking that too but I wanted to keep it as short as possible so it doesn’t stretch over too much. I’ll try and think of something thanks

 

[ppelec100]

The sentence 'solutions that works for you' would be better as 'solutions that work for you'.

The sentence about regulations and safety needs a bit of either re-wording or punctuation ' I'd at least put a comma after 'regulations'

I reworded it a little and made the changes you suggested… is this better?

With over 10 years’ experience, we take pride in delivering an excellent service with tailored solutions that would work for you. Our work is carried out to an extremely high standard with great attention to detail, whilst complying with all relevant regulations, we place safety as our utmost priority. Our commitment to tidiness ensures you will be left with a hassle-free experience.

 

[brianmoooore]

Lose the apostrophe after 'years' and insert 'of'.
Second sentence is a little long and clumsy. Possibly better if you replace the comma after 'regulations' with a full stop, start a new sentence with 'We', remove the full stop after 'priority' and insert 'and'.
Could do with giving some idea of geographical location.
Just my opinion, of course.

 

[ppelec100]

Lose the apostrophe after 'years' and insert 'of'.
Second sentence is a little long and clumsy. Possibly better if you replace the comma after 'regulations' with a full stop, start a new sentence with 'We', remove the full stop after 'priority' and insert 'and'.
Could do with giving some idea of geographical location.
Just my opinion, of course.

Wow thank you this feels much better.
Good shout on the location I’ll put “based in London & Essex” as I’m bordering between the two

 

[mickegh]

I've done a final draft for you


We have over 10 years’ experience and take pride in delivering an excellent service with tailored solutions to meet your needs .

Safety is a priority and we work is to the highest standards complying with all relevant regulations

Our commitment to tidiness and attention to detail ensures a hassle-free experience.

 

[baldelectrician]

Maybe I am just getting older, I find a lack of landline style number concerning on a business.

I specifially do not put my mobile number on as the calls divert to it (so people get me), however the landline number has a message saying calls are recorded and are being diverted to the electrician
This cuts out spam calls and does not make me miss many calls (I get an email of any missed calls with the call ID and time of call)
This allows me to record the calls

 

[ppelec100]

I've done a final draft for you

and “we work is” to the highest

Alllllmost the final draft

 

[ppelec100]

Maybe I am just getting older, I find a lack of landline style number concerning on a business.

I specifially do not put my mobile number on as the calls divert to it (so people get me), however the landline number has a message saying calls are recorded and are being diverted to the electrician
This cuts out spam calls and does not make me miss many calls (I get an email of any missed calls with the call ID and time of call)
This allows me to record the calls

Yeah I agree landline number would be more professional etc but I’m just starting out so I’m far from getting one plus it’s an extra cost. Maybe when I’m a bit more established.

The spam call thing sounds really useful though, those people do my nut in

 

[pirate]

....and I still maintain that apostrophe should go!

 

[brianmoooore]

....and I still maintain that apostrophe should go!

Definitely. There's nothing possessive about 'years'.

 

[ppelec100]

....and I still maintain that apostrophe should go!

You will be pleased to know that it’’’’’s been removed now

 

[pirate]

Its good to see its been removed! OOPS!

 

[mickegh]

....and I still maintain that apostrophe should go!

Agree .Not sure why i have it in there . Maybe the auto-correct shoved it in